Emily's+responces

Alex- Great paper! I love how you incorporated so much detail into a narrative paper. Touching on the events of the night before the big day of the quarries worked well. It was a good lead into your topic. Suggestions: It would be cool to hear about your thoughts looking back on it now.

Andrea- Your honesty in the first paragraph about your initial reason for going hooked me because i wanted to find out how that feeling changed. I really liked how you talked about the competitive atmosphere and related it back to yourself. I know how competitive you and those athletes are, maybe you could talk more about that and how today it still affects you?

James- Great detail, I can actually picture everything you talked about. I like how you ended it by talking about how no other winter experience can compare to Cannon mountain. I think you should either choose to focus more narrative and how Cannon shapes you.