Katherine's+Responses

A Long Ride by James Donavon James I love how detailed your essay was. I could picture exactly what you were doing and it made me feel like I was there.

The Quarries Alex I love the first paragraph of your essay!! So detailed and fun.

La Paloma ave. Em I love how you tell the story about you and Saym going to the grocery store. The rest of the essay is so detailed that when you get to the end and the reader realizes how young you were it makes the memories seem that much more important.